Very creative thinking Hasan, but at the same time there
were several grammatical errors. Here is a corrected version
-
Mr. White
: Don’t cry honey , I am here
and I will protect you. Dont you see, even
I am upset!
Mrs.
White: I am very feeling very scary. I can
scarcely believe or even imagine what
is happening right now… my son
is g..one forever! I need my son . I can't
live without him.
Mr.
white : Stop
crying, dear! Herbert is not just your son ,he is my son
too ,if we continue to cry and weep, we will never be able to
forget this disaster and will not be able to
stay alive , this was his destiny ,every
person has to die
…
Mrs.
White : oh..oh Herbert why did
you leave us ! I told you to throw it but
you kept it
!
Mr. White :
it’s not my fault ! why
do you blame me?!
Mrs. White
: I can’t believe
it ..I just want to leave this house ,everything
here reminds me of my son
!
M r. White:
this is a good idea to forget our disaster.
Don't worry, our son will still alive in our
hearts.
Mrs. White : hold my
hand and let’s get out of here!
This is should help
!
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