Edmund Spenser's "One Day I Wrote Her Name," is a
fourteen-line sonnet written about a woman that he loves, as he tries to eternalize her
in verse, so that she will live on forever.
The sonnet is
written in iambic-pentamter, with the rhyme scheme ABABCDCDEFEFGG, which shows the
pattern of rhyme scheme; there is rhyming couplet at the end of the poem, which acts as
the summary of the previous twelve lines.
The first four
lines show the futility of life—or love—lasting forever, like writing in the sand. The
speaker says that he does this: writing his sweetheart's love in
the sand, but that the waves come and wash it away
twice.
One
day I wrote her name upon the strand,
But came the waves
and washed it away:
Agayne I wrote it with a second
hand,
But came the tyde, and made my paynes his
pray.
In the next four lines,
the speaker's lady love tells him that he works in vain to immortalize her, "A mortal
thing…" She points out that one day she will die—her body will fall to decay as all
living things must—in that moment, she says her name will be lost, wiped out as the wave
erases the letters in the sand. In essence, she is telling him to "pull himself
together: this is the way of life and death."
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Vayne men, sayd she, that doest in vaine
assay,
A mortall thing so to
immortalize,
For I my selve shall lyke to this
decay,
And eek my name bee wyped out
lykewize.
The author's love
for this woman is so great that he refuses to accept what she has said, and strives to
prove her wrong. Other things that are "baser" may die and rot, but
he insists that by writing this poem, he will immortalize her so
that long after her death, even the heavens will remember her
"glorious" name. In this he is now not speaking of her natural
beauty, but her spiritual
"loveliness."
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...he seeks to immortalize...not the physical
beauty of the beloved, but those spiritual qualities…[of her] spiritual
beauty...
Perhaps he is not
only promising that men and angels will remember her and she will live on, but some
essence of this woman he loves so passionately will live on in him with these
words.
Not
so, (quod I) let baser things devize
To dy in dust, but you
shall live by fame:
My verse your vertues rare shall
eternize,
And in the hevens wryte your glorious
name.
The rhyming couplet
serves to summarize the poem's intent. This is the main thought the speaker is trying to
share—to make understood. He claims that while the rest of the world will pass away—be
"subdued" by the circle of life and death—his love will allow them both to live on in
this verse.
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Where whenas death shall al the world
subdew,
Our love shall live, and later life
renew.
The poet believes that
while people pass away, words eternalize a person so that he or she may live on beyond
the boundaries that apply to most humans. The theme of immortality achieved through
literature is not uncommon, and in all the years that have passed since the poem's
inception, though we do not know her name, we still remember his love for her—which
does live on in verse.
In Sonnet 75,
Spenser's "One Day I Wrote Her Name...
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...he claimed to have found permanence in the
monument created by
art
Spenser believes that by
eternalizing the beautiful essence of her spirituality, she will
live on in the next life—as will their love—beyond the end of time on
earth.